english 2019 Essay

so this is my essay it is not the best.

Introduction: 

A memorable idea In Children of Blood and Bone by Tomi Adeyemi is seeing others as individuals
in the novel father carving MAGGOT into Zelie’s back and inan can’t do anything about it.
It shows father hates the maji so much he carved Maggot into a Girls back.
A challenging setting is not sure. I don’t 

Body 1 

The  idea is shown in chapter 66

 WhenFather standing there and carving MAGGOT into  Zelie’s back is just another day’s work he said
 In that instant, it hits me  Zulaikha’s death. Zélie’s screams. And inan can't do a thing about her scream.
They don’t mean a thing to him. Because they’re maji, they’re nothing. 

Body 2

This idea is still shown in chapter 66  

This really shows that father hates maji so much he carved MAGGOT.
in a girl back and made her scream and scar on her back for the rest of her life. 

Body 3 

This idea is shown in chapter 64 

   My duty has to be keeping Orïsha alive.
But the creed rings hollow, carving a hole inside me like the knife that carved through Zélie’s back.
Duty isn’t enough when it means destroying the girl I love.
Zélie and Inan have lost a part of themselves because of King Saran.

Zélie performs the ritual, which seems to give magic back to -everyone-
We are all human. So inan save Zelie from the pain. 

Conclusion

So i don’t know if I answer the question I tried my best

It can be hard life.